Story 44
Lou-Anne and the Thief of Reflections
12 minute read · Mystery and problem-solving
It was a still, golden evening when Lou-Anne and her friends walked to the water hole.
The air was warm but gentle, and the Savannah seemed to be taking a quiet breath after a hot day. The reeds whispered softly at the edge of the water, dragonflies skimmed low across the surface, and the sky was turning peach and pink as the sun began to sink.
“It’s perfect reflection weather,” said Lou-Anne happily.
M’Pofo nodded. “The water is calm.”
Kiera bounced ahead and peered over the edge. “Look! I can see myself!”
Sure enough, the water hole looked like a mirror. Kiera’s long ears showed clearly in the water. Lou-Anne could see her own face too, with her blonde hair glowing in the evening light. Vakawu immediately swung down from a branch to admire himself, because naturally that was his first priority.
“Yes,” he said grandly. “The water confirms it. I remain excellent.”
Ubejane stepped up beside him. “Move over. I would like to inspect my horn.”
Marmalade sat on a flat stone and leaned forward, staring at his own orange reflection with great seriousness, as if he had discovered another cat living in the water and had not yet decided whether to approve.
Everything was peaceful.
Then—
Plop!
The water suddenly rippled.
Kiera’s reflection vanished.
Lou-Anne’s face broke into wobbly lines.
Vakawu’s beautiful mirror image disappeared completely.
“Hey!” cried Vakawu. “Who did that?”
Everyone looked round.
But there was nobody there.
The water slowly went still again.
“There,” said Lou-Anne. “Now it’s calm.”
M’Pofo leaned down to look at his reflection.
Plip-plop!
Ripples spread out across the water again.
His face dissolved into shimmers.
“That,” said Ubejane, “is suspicious.”
Now everyone was paying attention.
Lou-Anne crouched near the edge and watched carefully. “Maybe a fish?”
“Maybe a crocodile,” whispered Vakawu at once.
Ubejane gave him a flat look. “You always want it to be a crocodile.”
“I do not want it to be a crocodile,” Vakawu said. “I merely think it is useful to remain open to drama.”
Kiera leaned over again. “My reflection’s back!”
She smiled at the water.
Plop!
Gone again.
“Oh!” she cried. “Someone really is stealing them!”
Marmalade stood up, arched his back slightly, and glared into the water as if the entire hole had personally insulted him.
Lou-Anne frowned. “Every time one of us looks, the ripples start.”
M’Pofo lifted his trunk thoughtfully. “As though something is watching us back.”
Vakawu sprang onto a branch overhanging the water. “At last. A proper mystery.”
Lou-Anne decided this called for detective work.
“Right,” she said. “Let’s look for clues.”
Kiera searched the muddy edge for tracks. Vakawu examined the branches above the water. M’Pofo listened for splashing. Ubejane stood with his head low and his ears turned forward, determined to notice something useful. Marmalade inspected the reeds, one suspicious paw-step at a time.
Lou-Anne knelt by the shore and looked very closely.
“There are bubbles,” she said.
Tiny ones were rising near a patch of reeds on the far side.
M’Pofo saw them too. “Something is under the water.”
Vakawu whispered dramatically, “A hidden monster.”
“Or,” said Ubejane, “something smaller and less ridiculous.”
They all watched.
The bubbles stopped.
Then, just for a second, something rounded and grey-brown slipped beneath the surface.
Kiera gasped. “I saw it!”
“So did I,” said Lou-Anne. “But what was it?”
Before anyone could answer, a soft little snort came from the reeds.
Not a dangerous sound.
More like a wet, surprised sneeze.
Lou-Anne blinked. “That didn’t sound like a monster.”
“No,” said M’Pofo. “It sounded young.”
Very slowly, Lou-Anne stood up and walked a little closer to the reeds.
“It’s all right,” she called softly. “We’re not cross. We just want to know why you keep stealing our reflections.”
For a moment, nothing happened.
Then the reeds rustled.
Out popped two tiny ears.
Then a pair of wide eyes.
Then, with a great deal of caution and a little bit of mud on his nose, a baby hippo emerged from the shallow water.
He was small for a hippo, round in the middle, and looked deeply embarrassed.
Kiera gave a delighted squeak. “A hippo calf!”
Vakawu nearly fell off his branch. “That is not what I was expecting.”
The baby hippo blinked at them. “I’m sorry,” he mumbled.
Lou-Anne smiled gently. “Were you the one making the ripples?”
The little hippo nodded.
“Why?” asked M’Pofo kindly.
The baby shuffled one foot in the mud. “I thought I was helping.”
Everyone stared.
“Helping?” said Ubejane.
The little hippo looked at the water hole. “Every time someone leaned over the water, I saw another animal appear underneath. I thought they were trapped in the water. So I made ripples to break them free.”
There was a long pause.
Then Kiera pressed both paws over her mouth to stop a laugh.
Vakawu failed completely and made a small choking sound in the tree.
Lou-Anne, however, stayed very gentle. “You thought our reflections were animals stuck in the water?”
The baby hippo nodded sadly. “Yes. And every time I broke them, they disappeared. So I thought I was rescuing them.”
M’Pofo made the warmest little rumble. “Oh, my dear one.”
Marmalade, who had returned to his stone, sat down and looked at the baby hippo with a great deal more sympathy than before.
Lou-Anne crouched beside the water.
“Look,” she said. “Come here.”
The baby hippo approached slowly and stood beside her.
She pointed to the still surface. “That’s me.”
He peered down.
“And that,” said Lou-Anne, smiling, “is my reflection. It isn’t another girl trapped in the water. It’s just the water showing my face back to me.”
The little hippo stared.
Then M’Pofo stepped closer so his own reflection appeared too.
“And mine,” said M’Pofo.
Kiera leaned in carefully. “And mine!”
Vakawu swung down and arranged himself by the shore. “And, for educational purposes, mine.”
The baby hippo blinked at all the reflections. “So… they belong to the real animals standing above them?”
“That’s right,” said Lou-Anne.
“And if I make ripples…” he began.
“They wobble,” said Kiera.
“They don’t drown,” said Ubejane.
The baby hippo looked relieved. “Oh.”
Then he looked horrified. “Oh no. I have been ruining everyone’s faces all evening.”
“That,” said Vakawu, “is true. Mine suffered especially.”
The baby hippo introduced himself as Biko, and once he realised he had not actually been rescuing anyone, he relaxed at once.
“I’m sorry,” he said again. “I only wanted to help.”
Lou-Anne reached out and patted his broad little shoulder. “That was kind. Just mistaken.”
Omi, who had come along quietly and heard the last part, smiled and nodded. “Sometimes a good heart simply needs the right information.”
Biko looked at the water again. “May I try something?”
“Of course,” said Lou-Anne.
He stood very still beside the others and looked down.
There, side by side in the calm evening water, were all their reflections:
Lou-Anne’s bright face,
M’Pofo’s great gentle shape,
Kiera’s neat kangaroo ears,
Vakawu’s skinny monkey grin,
Ubejane’s horn,
Marmalade’s serious orange cat face,
and beside them, one round baby hippo.
Biko’s eyes went wide. “That’s me!”
Kiera laughed. “Yes!”
“And I’m not trapped,” he said.
“No,” said M’Pofo. “You are definitely not trapped.”
After that, the water hole became even more cheerful.
Biko practised standing still so he could admire everyone’s reflections without “rescuing” them by mistake. Lou-Anne showed him how the sky reflected too, and the reeds, and even the moon when it rose.
Vakawu kept checking himself every few minutes, just in case the water changed its mind about his excellence.
Ubejane admitted that reflections were “more useful than expected.”
Marmalade spent several minutes watching the moon appear in the water and then looking up to make sure it had not actually fallen in.
As the evening deepened and silver light spread across the hole, Biko let out a happy little snort.
“I like reflections,” he said.
Lou-Anne smiled. “Me too.”
“And,” Biko added, “I will not steal them again.”
“That,” said Ubejane, “is appreciated.”
When at last it was time to go home, Lou-Anne looked back once more at the still, shining water.
The mystery had seemed strange at first.
A thief of reflections!
A ripple-maker in hiding!
A possible monster, according to Vakawu.
And all along, it had only been a baby hippo trying to help in the wrong way.
As they walked home beneath the first stars, Lou-Anne thought about that.
Sometimes mysteries are not caused by badness at all.
Sometimes they begin with a misunderstanding, a kind heart, and a splash.
And at the water hole that night, there was not a single reflection missing.
Only a few extra smiles.